This is our audience feedback. I chose to type it up so that we didn't lose any of the feedback given. We have taken this feedback on-board. Here are some of the improvements we were given to make. We found that as a group, these little things can be changed with small adjustments. I found that there are some solutions all these points.
- Blue - We can add another shooting day and add some juxtaposing shots. We can achieve this with colours. I think that it would be a good idea to have her surrounded by people who are completely different to her. People have told us they like the edgy feel of her dark lipstick and we should play on this. For example, if we surround her with people in white and she can now wear darker clothing with dark lipstick & crazy hair.
- Yellow - I feel that if we do achieve the first point successfully, we would be able to replace the time lapse with other shots. These newer shots would fit better and fit better with our artist herself.
- Pink - This would be easy as we can achieve it by filming close up of both our artist, the horses and even the flowers & nature.
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