Title Number 2

Due to class discussions and the input of friends and target audience, we found a mixed view on our first title. We decided to create another title which is a little less detailed but effective at the same time. I feel that this title works well as it is included by doesnt add too much time onto the song or the video. I feel that if the title is too long, the target audience will get bored at the beginning of the music video. As a group, we created another title. We understand that this title needs improving but we feel that have 2 will give us the chance to get target audience feedback so we can choose the title which best suits our artist and our target audience.